列位学霸们好，今天黄导师跟我们来分享一下上周六雅思大做文真题范文和剖析，上周考题以下
2020.12.18真题
Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s bad for themself. Why? What effective way can improve people’s healthy eating habits?
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真题剖析
上周考题话题范围为快餐废物食物类（高频！），疑种别为report种别，这类题罕见有两种疑形势
-What are the advantages and disadvantages?
-What are the causes and effects/solutions?
在写这类题的时刻，同学们切记不-要遗忘疑中的复数了，剑桥中明确乞求复数疑必须给出多个论点回覆（详细解读请戳黄导师以前的视频剑桥解读雅思大做文排列），因此岂论是长处仍然弱点和缺点，本因仍然处置办法，同学们都必-要写最少两个（一样平常也就写两个）吖。
同时，关于这道题目，黄导师想重伸一下solution，也即是处置办法的写法同学们切记不-要把办法写成口号吖。
✅办法政-局能够对不安康食物价税，用税收补助安康食物来激励人们购置吖。（下文论点）
❎口号人们应该多吃安康食物，少吃不安康食物吖。
从中文来看，同学们能够分明的觉察，办法是一位能够推行的计划啦；而口号仅仅不过必-要到达的目的和建议吖。黄导师在修正作业时觉察有许多同学在写处置计划是会过错的空喊口号，而这是过错的吖。
因此，同学们能够参照一下范文中黄导师写的两个办法，同时注重累积范文中的好词好句哦！（所有文句均摘抄警戒英文期刊杂志报纸，为隧道英语搭配能够直-接背诵）
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满分辞汇/高分段落
2020.12.18真题
Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s bad for themself. Why? What effective way can improve people’s healthy eating habits?
满分辞汇
draw n. 吸引起人的场所
on the go 在忙碌中做什么
a sheer number of adj. 大量的
accessible adj. 简易来往到的
forgo v. 抛弃
detrimental adj. 损害的
taste bud n. 味蕾
subsidize v. 补助
daily intake n. 每一日摄入量
本因段
The first reason is that junk food and fast-food products are generally easy to grab and take with people. This ease is a major draw for many, especially people who work long hours or need to grab a snack on the go. The rapid production and easy storage are major reasons why a sheer number of people eat junk food. In addition, cost is a massive component of the draw to junk food, which tends to be extremely cheap. In fact, it normally costs several times as much to have a healthful diet as it does to eat junk food and fast-food products. When junk food is highly accessible, affordable and convenient, it becomes easy to forgo nutritious food. Finally, such food is tasty: although the high sodium and sugar content are detrimental for consumers, they make these foods appealing to the taste buds.
处置段
In order to promote a healthy diet, government can increase tax for junk food industry and use these revenues to subsidize healthy food, which will reduce the price for healthy food and hence increase its attractiveness, especially for households with tight budget on food. For individuals, creating a list which tracks daily eating and drinking intake is highly recommended. It is easily achieved today with varies mobile applications allowing users to upload the food they ate in a day and automatically generating a daily sum of nutrition and calories, which helps them to uncover their unhealthy diet habits.
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